Sunday, February 12, 2006

Advertisement for a Client

Here is the first draft of an ad I just wrote for a client. It'll run in a few glass industry magazines next month.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi Anesh

What did the client think of the ad?

10:24 PM  
Blogger Michael Ross said...

There are some things I don't like about it - mentioning Iran, Meet Mr...., and the first paragraph. But then again, I know nothing of Where this ad is supposed to run, When, or What glass buyers in India think of Iran as a whole.

My first thought about the headline was... go with the Chinese Angle... Chinese Glass Rejected. But like I said, I know nothing about Where this ad is to run or When or What the thoughts of the various countries are.

Michael

1:05 PM  

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