There are some things I don't like about it - mentioning Iran, Meet Mr...., and the first paragraph. But then again, I know nothing of Where this ad is supposed to run, When, or What glass buyers in India think of Iran as a whole.
My first thought about the headline was... go with the Chinese Angle... Chinese Glass Rejected. But like I said, I know nothing about Where this ad is to run or When or What the thoughts of the various countries are.
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Hi Anesh
What did the client think of the ad?
There are some things I don't like about it - mentioning Iran, Meet Mr...., and the first paragraph. But then again, I know nothing of Where this ad is supposed to run, When, or What glass buyers in India think of Iran as a whole.
My first thought about the headline was... go with the Chinese Angle... Chinese Glass Rejected. But like I said, I know nothing about Where this ad is to run or When or What the thoughts of the various countries are.
Michael
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